comment response #2
Comment was initially posted on “is this all too late?” Posted by: Anonymous.
Dream on my friend till the seas run dry
Or till the beating organ has depleted its sighs
Then through the sands of time of time of time
A new heart is energetised.
Let's celebrate my friend when you are done
With moaning and groaning and droning
For a new day has just begun :)
I suck in writing poem
But still I need to reply you
You could see how I suck at it
When I just rhymed poem with you
I wish that I could stop moaning and groaning
Not that I like it but I needed something to rhyme with drowning.
Man, I really suck big time in poem-ing
We shall celebrate for it’s a new dawn
A new day has begun and I know it’s a good one
And thanks to you, I’ve just written a sucky one :)
1 Comments:
Your poem may suck but it's from your heart
May jingle and jangle but it's a brand new start
Great to see that you're quite alright
Don't leave to waste all your great might
By Anonymous, at August 27, 2004 at 7:07 AM
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